Monday, March 23, 2009

Macbeth essay first draft

Nick Weibel

March 17, 2009

A: Block

Macbeth

Superstition Affects Human Behavior

The story of Macbeth is a story of a man confused with superstition and fate. His judgment affected by the three witches foreshadowing what is to come in Macbeths near future. Fate plays a huge role in this Dramatic Literature, so much of the drama that occurred during the play came from lies and prophesies brought on by the three witches, and also Lady Macbeth. Beginning (1.3.50-70) the three witches tell Macbeth and Banquo that first Macbeth will be Thane of Glamis, Thane of Cawdor, and then finally King of Scotland. “Thou shalt get kings, though thou be none. So all hail, Macbeth and Banquo!”(1.3.69-70) This is another example for the witches manipulating peoples minds for their own gain. Macbeth’s inability to filter out fact from fiction will ultimately lead to his demise.

Macbeth was very confident* that the witches prophesies where all truth and that fate would take its course. Too bad for Macbeth that his wife, Lady Macbeth is a manipulative,* greedy women that forces Macbeth to go and assassinate King Duncan. “We will proceed no further in this business. He hath honour’d me of late; and I have bought Golden opinions fro all sorts of people, which would be worn now in their newest gloss, Not cast aside so soon.” (1.7.33-37) Macbeth is obviously very cautious* about his decisions. He isn’t as devoted* to have Duncan killed as his wife is. But the thought of climbing the ladder of power so quickly sounded to could to let pass.

The night the murder was taking place King Duncan came to Macbeth’s castle to give him his thanks and praise .Plotting against the for so long had made Macbeth obsessed with becoming king. That very evening dinner was served to the guest of the castle. In each of Duncan’s guard’s beverages was a sedative so the King would be most vulnerable. Macbeth finally got the nerve to commit this cynical act to murder toward King Duncan. He stealthy entered the guest chambers where the king was sound asleep, stepped over the unconscious guards and approached his bedside. With an extremely eerie* expression on his face Macbeth struck down one of the guards daggers with a force that rumbled through the sleeping kingdom. So detached* from what he had just don’t, he had forgotten the plan. The plan was to frame the guards by placing the bloody dagger into their hands and then have them killed.

William Shakespeare used superstition in many important ways in Macbeth. We see that he uses figurative* language to make the witches prophesies more realistic, and more believable.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

1. The thesis is very clear. It gives the reader a good insight of what will be told in the essay. As soon as you read the introduction you start to think of ways that superstition can effect human behavior.
2.The strongest quotation is when he supplies a quote from the witches saying that banquo will father kings. I think this is the best because it gives a direct quote from the story.
3.The one thing is this essay that is really done good is the description of scenes. when the murder of king Duncan is explained, it gives a very good detail of what happened and how he killed the king."With an extremely eerie* expression on his face Macbeth struck down one of the guards daggers with a force that rumbled through the sleeping kingdom." that was the best description.
4.The author might want to add more than one example of how superstition effects human behavior. throughout the story, there are more than one way that superstition effects the characters.